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yes this image does have a connection with this piece of writin.. jus.. not so obvious.. and this writin here is a mix of old lines from past poems.. and some lines that were modified..
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i wish i could always hold on to your laughter
to slow me down when life would move much faster
i wish i could wrap your voice around my own
to walk my words across this silence i have known

again my thoughts run thru my mind
i wonder of the things i left behind
i feel like laughing
but i know that i am crying

something about me that i cannot quite control
walls that stand everytime i try to move
something that kills me at the end of every fold
voices that haunt the thoughts i leave untold

thoughts that drowned between our eyes
feelings that were thrown away as lies
the things i did but did not do
we could only watch as our worlds just grew askew

there was a time when you and i would walk
under the drug to just hear each other talk
there was a time when we bled each other's pain
with the infection that we were lost and gone insane

there was a time when everyday would taste so sweet
when we would lose in life but never sense defeat
there was a time when even crying had some fun
but that was back when you and i were one


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:iconboko:
That is hauntingly amazing...Well done
:iconraventhird:
This is just wonderful.

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:hug: It's a wonderful compostion Ivan. Is this just a general feeling piece or is this about a particular individual? In any event it's a nice piece :)

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:iconjerzchick16:
this is absolutely amazing. the art works so well with the composition!! i love it :+fav:

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if i stop myself before loving again, am i stopping myself from the greater pain as well..or only causing more of it?

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:iconivan-5252:
hu? :confused: :poke:

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:poke: nevermind :P

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#OogieBoogieAsylum come stop by and say hi sometime :eyes: :D

Don't ask others to do what you can do for yourself. :relaxed:
Life can be shit, so buy airfreshener and get over it.
:iconivan-5252:
:o :no:

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I'd rather have 3 real enemies than 1 fake friend.
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reality is wrong
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